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Eucalyptus Tree



Sunshine over valley low
cuddled by mountains
through highways of dirt
we walk holding hands

There nestled high
is dreams and love
serenader's chime in eve
inside rose felt hearts

they nuzzle under
a eucalyptus tree
benches heart shaped
and picnic blankets

aroma sets lovers a thrill
mountains away from all
dance their vows
if only trees could talk

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  • DogFish silver member
    September 21, 2008
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    "if only trees could talk"...I think you've made them sing!


    • DogFish silver member
      September 22, 2008
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      but then again
      ...oh no! but they mus'nt!