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A Stained Glass World

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a stained glass world
could be ours
if love was shared
each and every hour

spectrum of colors
vibrant and pure
reflecting compassion
for those far and near

helping the needy
by deed, not just word
sharing resources
thanksgiving is heard

A stained glass sunrise
could bless our vision
when living by love
becomes our decision



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Picture credit unknown, supplied by contest host

Contest quote: By Helen Steiner Rice

Great is the power of might and mind
But only love can make us kind
And all we are and hope to be
Is empty pride and vanilty
And if love is not a part of all
The greatest man is very small


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  • azure85 gold member
    March 28

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    Very beautiful poem, like the stained glass images as the rays of love shine forth. Oh, I miss having stained glass in my present church, I love the scenes and how pretty it looks. And your poem is beautiful too, shining forth His love.


  • ronnica
    October 14, 2008

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    You have brought compassion and hope into the fantasia of the picture, the last stanza could be a voice to the world. If only we could.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 12, 2008

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    Bravo!

    of a trophy. The glass through which we view our world truly colors our vision! Lovely flow, content & rhyme. This poem compliments the pix so beautifully! I love the way you end this piece:

    A stained glass sunrise
    could bless our vision
    when living by love
    becomes our decision

    Fine way for me to end up my day!


  • Sandygram
    September 26, 2008

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    This was a very lovely and thoughtful write. I love your last verse. Nice ending. Great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy


  • 2lullabyhaven
    September 24, 2008
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    Most heartfelt piece here - complimenting the prompt. Good luck to you in the contest lol


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    lovely piece

    of beautiful poetry here, thank you for this beautiful read to end my night,
    good luck in this contest
    Linda


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Brilliant!!!

    I am so glad I clicked here today. Your awe-inspiring poem really touched me, thank you for sharing. The beautiful imagery lends the perfect finishing touch to your muse's heart-felt message of love. I wish all the best to you, and good luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 21, 2008

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    This is very deep,
    and the first stanza opened up the poem really well
    but my fav was how you ended it.
    Very nice indeed.
    Good luck to you in the contest aswell
    All the best
    Ken


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 20, 2008

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    when guided by love and the love controls, peace from another is the feelings we will hold...I love the simply flow and the melody within, a beautiful song of love for the heart my dear Brother Gray Elk

  • azure85 gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Yes, a very thoughtful poem of what we can do, if united in love to help those around us. A glorious poem filled with loving thoughts.

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