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fed-up.



frustration climbs on me
like red ants; leaving crumbs
of dissatisfaction


among passing seconds.


notes of pure white paper
stare with blue-black pen marks
of hasty ‘rough work’


bruised and dry.


silence screams louder
than words and syllables rolled into
a single sound


curled up in a nanosecond.



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  • transit
    September 24, 2008

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    wow!

    I love your descriptions and how real it all felt. hey-we are going throught the same thing. (for the exam part)

    I am sorry it has to feel this way but hey it tells of how hardwrking you are. what could be better? and think of the relaxation after that. dancing in th rain and all.

    "silence screams louder
    than words and syllables rolled into
    a single sound"

    beautiful lines!! love you Charu.

    transit~


  • Miss Faith
    September 22, 2008
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    oh sweetie...