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Fight For Reality

A heart left on the curbside
To fend for just it's own
Sundown over the city streets and
Darkness is blinding the bloodflow to the brain
Chaos is taking her throne
Upon those prone to be insane
The asphalt streets are paved with silver ice
Stress whispers in his ear like succubi
Tempted by the words of hell
Another man lost to his dreams



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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a very sad take on this prompt, I can feel the fight for reality in this one. Best you in the contest

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    September 21, 2008
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    Very vivid. Beautiful.


  • Sir Squigglim
    September 21, 2008
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    Wow, that was really well written! Your word choice draws people in... it's really good!


  • innocence jaded.xx
    September 20, 2008

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    Wow, this is amazinggg. I love how you portrayed that picture so vividly. You honestly left me in awe with this piece;; it was beautiful & so painful in so many ways. Very VERY well written. Keep it up :] I'm going to have to read more of your poems Good luck in that contest doll♥