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#&*## (Honorable winner )

onto the floor
my chowder spills
welcome mat

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Ah, welcoming, indeed.
    Especially when you tell yuor guests
    that your floor is so clean
    they can eat off of it!


  • Canto-Brasileiro
    September 26, 2008

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    Still makes me laugh when I think about what you told me.
    Such a story behind this haiku


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    See now, you tell folk it was an accident but really you just don't want them to come in! Wouldn't work for me, I'd just start lapping it up...Hey! a floor is as good as a bowl or plate!

    Your sister expects you to clean it up...wait for her to arrive, hand her the mop.

    Mr. Troublemaker


  • catz Moderators member
    September 20, 2008

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    I can see it now, Sis... I hope you have it cleaned up before we get there
    And good luck in the contest

    Dee