Incandescent thoughts
Deviating moods from
Lingering in shadows
Extracting sighs
Melancholy morning
Invades deep within
Nuances both rich and
Delicate
Wilting words into air
Opaque with serenity
Needful things seem suddenly
Deemed inept, obsolete,
Erronious measures, before
Reality steps forward
Instinctively drawing a familiar heart
Nearer to its fated bed
Gracious to be welcomed home.
In a list
A contest entry
- Honoring Contest Hosts/Hostesses Part 2 by poet2angels.
700 points, ended September 30, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
Comments
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mmmm I think maybe I should have seen and commented on this long ago.
"Needful things seem suddenly
Deemed inept, obsolete,
Erronious measures, before
Reality steps forward"
you have indeed captured the un-cage-able and placed me on display with honor. I thank you my friend.
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awesome my dear friend you described him to a masterful tee as his art and poetic pen gives us so much to think about and deeply interpret the works of art. well done and many blessings always xxxx
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You have penned such a beautiful Acrostic in honor of one of my favorites who pens beauty and is a wonderful artist. I think you have captured him well in your beautiful dedication Acroostic...
This is amazing!
Lynda
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