This lonesome road
I have walked again, and again.
All alone this is my sin.
All these years all alone.
I have found many
Who would go.
I think again
No, I don't think so.
Many a time
I almost said so...
Thinking again,
Knowing for sure I let go.
The years went by
Almost like the sun,
I was happy with everyone.
I couldn't complain at all.
Knowingly I said
Just maybe today.
Well I was right.
For the road wasn't a
Lonesome Road ...
9-20-2008
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#4 Lonesome Road
A contest entry
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Comments
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nicely written. Good job
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It can be amazing who we may find on the way. There are those we choose to have join us and others we politely smile at as we pass.
I enjoyed this very much.
~Pamela 
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great job
I thought I was enstore for a sad ending then you made me smile. Sweet, Boog
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Footprints in the sand
There is always someone. Still better to reach out. Good luck in the contest.
Jim
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Nice twist of the prompt! Different and decidedly enjoyable.
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Mac, nice poem. I know someone with your talent and easy ways is not alone and I am glad for you. Take care and God bless you. Katie
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It is strang that we sometime appear to be alone, not knowing the reason could be because we do not see that with just a word or a smile the road no longer seem so empty.The road was never lonesome just us A fine piece Good luck in the contestm
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