I don't quite remember how it happened
Or how we got into this mess
I tried to refrain from doing
What I'm known for doing best.
Aw, what's the matter;
Are you afraid to look at me?
I could have sworn that no less than five minutes ago,
You told me that I was 'all you could see'.
Just like the rest, you're a liar,
So its up to me to dispose of you
Reaching into my back pocket for my safety pin,
To me, killing like this is nothing new.
Pinned under my body
I know you can't escape
I allow myself to laugh and run the tip over your cheek
All the while its being recorded on tape.
You're a screamer
And you won't shut your mouth
I have to find a way to shut you up,
So my hand begins to travel south.
A little pressure
And the needle peirces your skin
I'm beginning to see who you truly are
By the way you're confessing your sin.
Into your throat
The blood begins to rise,
You cry out again
As you tightly close your eyes.
Down to your wrist
I stab into your vein
Once, twice, and then thrice times!
Blood is spurting; it reminds me of rain.
Sloshed in your throat
From your blood, you're choking
I pull back and drive the pin into your neck
I can tell by your twitching that your close to croaking.
A kiss to your bloody lips,
I tell you I loved killing you slow
As is stand up and tuck away my pin
I watch you as you slowly go.
This was for the best
You were around too much; I couldn't stand the sight
If only you hadn't loved me,
I wouldn't have killed you to-night.
Author notes
I used the safety pin option! I hope this tickles your fancy. I know its long, but I really liked it..
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A contest entry
- Murder me by Kenneth James Hunter.
450 points, ended September 22, 2008, 5 entries
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FUCKING GREAT!!!
i'll give it all up to you !!!
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Oh nice!! Hehe.. i loved how you used the safety pin option and you really did a number with this piece. Awesome.
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wow, Jenna
damn....that's really good, Jenna. I love it..so..dark and evil...yet so amazing. You put so much detail into your poems..I love it.
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hehe, this indeed tickel my fancy as you put it.
I like a long poem, they have so much more details in them and I must say yours are very detailed.
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Holy Shit!!!! I love this poem!!!
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WOW
i loved it! it was dark, and freaky, and just absolutely fantastic. it's an amazing write, and i'm so glad you wrote it. good luck in the contest! i hope you win! -
OMG this was really scary what imagery. I hope I never ever make you mad or even worse like me. lol Great writing. Good Luck and God Bless
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Holy bloody crap.
that was fucking amazing. Death by a saftey pin.. well, ain't /that/ an oxymoron! LOL.
Wow... that was really good.
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