Mystic wings
against the sky
on the verge
of taking flight.
Prepared to go
and yet called back
oh tender heart
bright soul attatched.
Watch me soar into the light,
travel with me through the night.
A contest entry
- Fantasy Picture Inspired Contest IV by ShelleyA.
1000 points, ended September 30, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest Critique - How Do You Like My Soul?
Comments
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Good title and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Very nice meter and rhyming closing couplet. Thank you for your entry.
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A wonderful addition to the contest.. Much enjoyed...Good luck my friend.
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beautiful.
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Very nicely penned hunni
The thought of traveling on the back of that horse is a great one, I would love to do something like that, if only in dreams 
Superb take on the pic, good luck 
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