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ripples tear
epicentres spread over lake
water intact

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Haiku

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  • sheltered
    September 20, 2008
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    Nice distinct image.


  • maa gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    amazing !
    your wisdom filled words teach us an important lesson :
    that the essence of who we really are, stays forever
    unmovable, unchangeable, unshattered and immortal ...
    no event belonging to the realms of phenomenons can
    touch the intangible truth that is our essence ...

    bravo !