no tears fell from his eyes
no words were released from his mouth
but deep in his heart he lost everything
the heart held the truth of his emotions
but the mind held the lies
the mind didn't let the heat speak
for he had an image to keep up
a false act to protect him
and the others that stood around him
if truth flew like a bird form
his caged heart then hell
would break form his eyes
and the world would know
of his pain and would
see hid failers and mistakes
and watch as he fell hard
to the lonely ground
that held nothing
but the bones of the broken hearted
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
this is really deep i love it. very well written. i can really relate to it and i love the darkness of it. WELL DONE!!!!


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Wow that was very well written. I liked it, thanks for sharing on here. Keep it up.
APPLAUDS!!!
xTBx

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Great use of meterphore!I especally like thease lines
the heart held the truth of his emotions
but the mind held the lies
they are so meaningful great write!


