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hiden emotions

no tears fell from his eyes
no words were released from his mouth
but deep in his heart he lost everything

the heart held the truth of his emotions
but the mind held the lies

the mind didn't let the heat speak
for he had an image to keep up

a false act to protect him
and the others that stood around him

if truth flew like a bird form
his caged heart then hell
would break form his eyes
and the world would know
of his pain and would
see hid failers and mistakes

and watch as he fell hard
to the lonely ground
that held nothing
but the bones of the broken hearted

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  • wow

    this is really deep i love it. very well written. i can really relate to it and i love the darkness of it. WELL DONE!!!!


  • Touched by an Angel
    October 24, 2008

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    Wow that was very well written. I liked it, thanks for sharing on here. Keep it up.

    APPLAUDS!!!

    xTBx

  • know one
    September 20, 2008

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    Great use of meterphore!I especally like thease lines

    the heart held the truth of his emotions
    but the mind held the lies

    they are so meaningful great write!