weeping sky lay me to sleep,
these wounds are running deep,
and as I lay upon the ground,
how much longer can I weep...
once I thought of you,
as more than my own life,
worth more than my own breath,
every word you said was right;
now I know what you are,
as hot tears stain my cheek,
you are the chaos of my heart,
the realization running deep;
weeping sky lay me to sleep,
this truth is cutting deep,
and as I lay upon the ground,
how much longer can I weep...
confiding in your lies,
fooled by beauty and hope in part,
but realization crashes down on me,
and the truths tears me apart;
as I walk away from you,
and I fade into my mind,
I hope that in leaving this world,
there's something close to happiness,
that in the brevity of life I could not find;
weeping wrists lay me to sleep,
your words have cut too deep,
and as I lay upon the ground
no more will I weep.
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is awesome!
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hmm you haven't changed much, good write though
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aweome write. great emotion and imagery.
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wooow that was bloody amazing!!!!!!!!!!! absolutley brill! i looved everyyy part of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I just loved this! Great job. I loved the way your lines looked too. Loved the background. Just loved it all
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