pair of legs
shadowing door,
vacant door mat on piled thoughts
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by sheltered.
600 points, ended September 20, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very beautiful.. the background is kinda annoying to me.
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Thank you...changed the BG, what use is one if it annoys readers....
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Ohhh I love it!! I agree with Sheltered, unusual images, which is fab!
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Glad you like it!
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very good haiku. I can see it.
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Thanks...
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This is a very unusual image
which is a good thing.
The colors are annoying
but i'll get over it.
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Glad you like it
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hha, this is really cool, terrific haiku and good luck
Stephanie ♥ -
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I actually saw a shadow, but missing person
....too many thoughts ...perhaps
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hahaha, wow, i would have freaked and ran for my covers, cause im weird like that
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absorbing, good twist
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Thank you
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