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Sun's Fingers

wind sprinkled colours
tramped rosy fingers across
an autumn's carpet

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  • SezmeKnuHart
    July 31
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    lovely, descriptive

    • saddie23
      July 31
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Saddie23


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 25, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery in this haiku. it has such a calming and serene feel to it. Autumn is, truly, a beautiful season. Thanks for sharing.

    • saddie23
      December 25, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Saddie23


  • Super-man
    October 15, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Stunning, I can just see it, rays through the trees.

    Stunning

    • saddie23
      October 15, 2008
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      thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful sentiments. Saddie23


  • Malabu
    September 22, 2008
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    lovely ku...
    congratulations too

    • saddie23
      September 22, 2008
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      thank u

      You know I didn't think I would win, but came to the contest with a positive attitude and it paid off. Kinda shock. Thank you for reading and commenting. Saddie23


  • Arkbear gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Very nice saddie

     

    Good job on taking the Bronze

     

    God bless you!

     

    Bear ~

     

    • saddie23
      September 21, 2008

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      thank u

      Thank you, This means a lot to me that my writing is getting better. I like the applaudes too. Saddie23


  • NeonRose
    September 21, 2008
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    A lovely view! Congratulations on the Bronze!

    • saddie23
      September 21, 2008
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      thank u

      Thank u for the wonderful response. I really didn't think I would win, but I was surprised when I came in with bronze trophy. Thank u again for the applaudes. Saddie23


  • sheltered
    September 20, 2008
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    I don't know if it was intended
    but I see hidden erotic meaning
    and like this much.

    • saddie23
      September 21, 2008
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      Wow

      I didn't realize I did that, but thank you so much for the wonderful comments given. The applaudes are welcome too. Saddie23

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