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Secret Romance

How we started this love affair
I really don't remember
I only know that it began
on a date in September.

It feels like we have
been friends forever long
Here with you I feel
is where I may belong.

The distance that seperates us
is so many hours by air
how did I happen upon you
and this online love affair?

What I wouldn't give
just to see your face
close this gap between us
of distance, time and space.

In you arms is where
I truly long to be
If only I could hold you
If only we were free.

But I will gladly take
every second that we share
and try not to think
how life is so unfair.

So we keep our romance secret
yet every one here will know
with each and every passing day
my feelings only grow.




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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    The story that some can identify with I am sure on this site, and others...It is sad that one cannot see the other....You have encompassed the whole of the emotional hardship that exists with an online love....I will keep this as bookmarked!


  • cre8tiv-writer
    September 24, 2008
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    So deeply saddening, but heartbreakingly beautiful....great job girlie!!


  • poppa
    September 20, 2008

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    Wonderful write... can feel the longing within your words... internet love affairs ... hmmm not sure they are all that love the flow and the rhyme is smooth

  • Naraku No Hana
    September 20, 2008

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    omg this is so beautiful, yet so sorrowful. Stunning poem and your rhyme is wonderful. This is such a touching poem! Keep up your hard work and do your best! Hopefully you'll be rewarded one day for your effort and close the gap between you two!


    • sensualbutterfly
      September 20, 2008
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      thank you so very much for your sweet comment. I can only hope that in time the distance will not be as it is now.

  • mcfreeman
    September 20, 2008
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    What May Be....

    conceived in the mind...can be real in time.


    • sensualbutterfly
      September 20, 2008
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      Yes and if only is a story of my life...thanks for reading. You know I appreciate it

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