A drip on paper,
all it is,
a drip of acid,
a dark amber treat.
Beautiful fantasy,
haunting nightmare,
all are welcome guests.
Acid dream.
Author notes
"I love the simple things in life, you know... like acid."
25 word or less contest...
A contest entry
- brown. by iverbthenoun.
300 points, ended September 20, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like how simplistic this is....it takes something like acid trips which can very much be broadened and condenses it and leaves much to the readers imagination...i really like this piece....it is very well written...
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Wow, this is really interesting,
I like the wording and flow,
Good job
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Hmmm this is quite different. Really well written. Nice work
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