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Choice

He comes home, Bad day at work
He stubles in hoping to find her
the one thing in his life that
keeps him going
he finds her
Sleeping
with another
His brother.

He screams, then runs
goes to the door
she screams also
telling him
its not what
it looks like

He grabs the gun
he aims and fires...

Option a or option b..

A. He shot her
the brother ran up and
stood there stunned
he reloaded the gun
and shot him
then walked out slowly
never to be found again


B. He shot himself
Through the mouth
he fell to the floor,
she falls crying.
The brother runs up and
stands there stunned.
They get married and
have children
live happily
Ever
after

Sometimes
Ones life
isnt full of
happieness
and doesnt have to
be alive to bring it.

Always Love Even if eXhilerated.

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  • butterflytears
    September 22, 2008
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    dude...totally the best you've written in awhile. amazingly awesome!