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Evaporated

Evaporated colors
Stolen by light
These words no longer mean anything
It's hard to imagine
The significance they once held
In there carefully thought out letters

 

Evaporated words

Stolen by crippling silence

These thoughts and concerns wasted

On the deaf ears of our fathers

Tears roll down upon these broken  moments

The lightest words bathed in dark bitterness

 

Evaporated on these pages

Pain that was once forgotten

Silence killing all the life left

Rebounding off these broken walls

Tear drops parading on the floors

There's sorrow in silence

Something to come home to

 

Evaporated tears 

Washed away by suns passing

But forever staining our cheeks

The past never to be forgotten

Invisably weeping

Heart clenching and writhing

We Evaporated into darkness 

 

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Here's a poem for you! I missed you all

I Missed You People!

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  • angelaononchan
    September 21, 2008
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    So sad. . I like you talking about evaporate. but I thought evaporating meant that evaporating the sadness inside you. But it is bad for evaporating your and hehe I am repeating evaporate too. Missed who all? Friends? It was good and sad at the same time. Do you have to put in full stops i poems? If you don't, then that is okay.


  • nichtmich silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    Terribly sad and expressive. I like the repetition of evaporate. Your imagery of sadness is really good