Soft caress
like silk upon my petals
sounds, sweetly spilling
my fluttering heart's desire;
this pulsating wildflower
awakened
by your whispered touch,
smile, warm as moon's hue;
your brush
sculpting my every curve
as twilight takes a glimpse
into our curtains,
seeking sigh.
♥♥
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Author notes
"SENSUAL That is what I am looking for."
A contest entry
- ONE KISS LED TO SOMETHING WONDERFUL by Swan song.
450 points, ended September 20, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very beautifully penned sensual write indeed. I am absolutely not suprised what so ever thatcha won the gold on this poem for the contest. what does amaze me and makes me smile is how such a warm soft sensual pic as you have posted with the poem produce such a poem like this one. as always wonderful work and keep me up =)
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sensual is what you found too
I almost slipped off the page from the silky smooth lines..love the alliteration
sounds, sweetly spilling
not often does a write hold so much texture
or insight to do this to the reader
just wowed me girl
golden, ya reckon
lol
peace and hugs
Muddy
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Well This was just good period. Thank you so much for the entry
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Indeed a very sensual work of poetry dear poet. You've moved me and made my sense stand on nerve endings. Beautiful! Loved the last lines. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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well you certainly know how to get my sensual side stirring, this was truly breathtaking, I think I need a cold shower now - the warmth within the words is so prominent.
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Such a silken touch to love...carress of feather close to windsong...just wonderful, angel poet
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another beautiful write ... this definitely is your forte (love that word
) ... always your writes have such a gentle rhythm, love it
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Fever
The song.. You give me fever.. comes to mind. And oh yes so very warm an delicious... lol I do mean the write.
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Inspirational.
Gentle are the souls who leave traces
of friendly faces, the tenderness in
their eyes grace all with smiles, as
pieces bring peace to the hearts of
lost beats, and just a kind word can
mend one complete. This write is candy sweet!
Thanks for sharing you, much love sis!
Brother Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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awwwww, Bro what a sweet and beautiful comment!
TY for all of your support and your broad shoulders
Lynda
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We seek touch and dream of its graceful fall: leaves in autumn, curtains across the cheek as we stare at a summers day, the last kiss of a summer sun, a caress when the kiss is done. In texture, tone and color love falls from a touch in the light of your words.
Love, Tom B.
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Ty for such a wonderful comment Bro
You always make me smile
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