Rain, Rain, Go Away,
Come Again Another Day.
Blood, Blood, Draining Down,
Lying Here Left to Drown.
Pierce My Soft Skin,
Sharp Thorns Like Pins.
Red Water Seep Out,
Drown Out My Painful Shouts.
Not A Thing To Say,
Everything Has Darkened Now.
Please Don't Fear, Darling,
Now I'm Here To End It All.
My Dark Bloody Rose,
All Ready To Decompose.
The Crying, Bleeding Skies,
Raining Down All of the Lies.
Rain, Rain, Go Away,
Come Again Another Day.
Blood, Blood, Draining Down,
Lying Here Left To Drown.
Pierce My Soft Skin,
Sharp Thorns Like Pins.
Red Water Seep Out,
Drown Out My Painful Shouts.
Not A Thing To Say,
Everything Has Darkened Now.
Please Don't Fear, Darling,
Now I'm Here To End It All.
My Dark Blood Rose,
All Ready to Decompose.
The Crying, Bleeding Skies,
Raining Down All The Lies.
Holes, Holes, Everywhere,
Please, Just End This Affair.
Don't Ever Come Back To Me,
I Don't Want You To Agree....
Author notes
...xD I don't know. Everyone else likes it, it's okay, I suppose.
A contest entry
- TwIsTeD by InMyFlames.
650 points, ended October 28, 2008, 13 entries
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Opinions, Criticism
Comments
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its awesome! i think its a bit like a song. great job
"Holes, Holes, Everywhere,
Please, Just End This Affair.
Don't Ever Come Back To Me,
I Don't Want You To Agree...."
beautiful ending

