chestnut tree -
beneath it’s bare limb
a squirrel gathers his nuts
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A contest entry
- Haiku by sheltered.
600 points, ended September 20, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Blow Fish and Sea Cucumbers-Naughty Ku and Tanka contest by Draig aine.
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Honorable mention
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Very nice naughty ku! Good luck in this contest.
qt :-)
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gorgeous write!
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hahaha! clever imagery!
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hehehe...good one...loved it
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Yes!!!
He should never have let them go in the first place. Now, his bare limb is an only child. Bravo!
Don
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grin
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such simplicity can say so much. The imagery in your writings far covers what so few words can explain. (havent talked in ages hope you are doing well my friend)
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excellent
Excellent ku Mally
Except I have a squirrel on my roof everyday
Drives me bonkers
Guess he is hiding his nuts in the gutter roflol
Love this and best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Your lil sis
Susan~~~~
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LUMB
"laughing under my breath"
and out loud... lol
I like that this could be
purely innocent but I think not.
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without nuts,
the cold winter days
would be very
bleak for the
squirrel.
Lane xxoo
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Oh! my
This could be naughty or nice lol. Loved. Saddie23
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