Under a surge of destruction and defeat,
Watching my limbs fall apart from me,
This is life: I'll tell you what that means.
Feeling the pain of all who mistreat,
I stand in fear of what I will be.
This is wisdom: I'll tell you what that means.
My hands are shacking; I stare at my blood,
And the ground is giving way under me.
This is face: I'll tell you what that means.
When raven's tears fall in the mud,
The fault is mine for all to see.
This is time: I'll tell you what that means.
Your hand quivers ere it debates where to strike.
My eyes burn in chaos and fear.
This is love: I'll tell you what that means.
Flying on carts, speeding and turning alike,
In joy do we let fly our hands and our tears,
This is pain: I'll tell you what that means.
Your upturned hands are burning and cold.
Black tears fall down your cheek, and I cry.
This is fear, I'll tell you what that means.
Your hot breath from years of old,
Down my neck from your bored sigh.
This is disease: I'll tell you what that means.
The taste of a lie rolling over my lips,
Rejection from the only One Who matters,
This is sin: I'll tell you what that means.
Author notes
This is meant to be something to think about. If you don't get any of the metaphor after much thought, then ask me and I'll explain it.
A contest entry
- ~Do Still Not Know What Sin Is~ by SoulfulBubbles.
300 points, ended October 2, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give ME EMOTION by Violent Glass.
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