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Amidst Heavenly Graces .... is You

pieced together with heavenly graces
feeling lost but knowing never alone
touched evermore by angelic embraces
burdens of disdain fighting to atone

as love and compassion evoke tears
upon the soul with lasting promise
facing together our silenced fears
dreaded imperfections seem far amiss

when hope is lost in a whispered song
faith opens doors reviving love so true
amidst thoughts making the spirit strong
know I stand with arms open wide for you

sharing each day vibrantly filled full with life
as rainbows shine prismatic hues, erasing our strife

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# 3.If you are familiar with anyone on the list, you may write about something that they love or write in a form or style they admire ...I will leave this option up to you. Write something that you know will personally appeal to the honoree.

Timothy, poeticweaver http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver

My very dear brother heart and soul, I was inspired by the beauty of your many sonnets you have done for me that with tears in return I attempted my very 1st one for you with love always xxxxxx

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  • poet2angels gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Every word spoken of Timothy is true...He is a blessing to know and loved by many
    Ty for entering this most deserved dedication for our Poeticweaver...

    Lynda


  • thepoetssoul
    September 28, 2008

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    This is a wonderful piece of poetry.
    Tis in exellent form and rhymes well
    And the ending is really good.That is what a rainbow doesBest of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Beautiful,

    Thanks so much my sweet sis-star, you shine so bright and make me smile. I'm very blessed to have you pen me a write from your heart. You are so much appreciated, and I love the way you weaved this beauty! Sending you much love and light, your bro, and true blue friend forevermore, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x x x