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Brown Ducks Swimming

As the sun rose this morning
The brilliant lights did I see
Colors everywhere
Green  grass and leaves
Waters blue sparkling
Brilliantly like diamonds
Brown ducks swimming
Yellows of buttercups
Reds of poppies
Nodding their heads in the breeze
A black spider spinning
Silver silken strands in her web
What a wonderful
Colorful world God created
For you
And

For me!
 
Thank you, Father
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • kdom
    March 19
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    I wish I could be in the place you described here!


  • Nienna Calmcacil
    October 5, 2008

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    Wonderful imagery =) God really did create a beautiful world for us.

    Thanks for entering! <3


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 2, 2008
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    A beautiful write full of delights the Father has given us to enjoy. I like the background also.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Lovely gentle write, sis..It's gentle rhyme interspersed now and then and the beautiful colors in the background with water's subtle reflection make it a joy to behold...Nice to visit today and read!


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a lovely write. Your poem is as beautiful as the background. Great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    lovely

    the poetry sings as the rhyme shines through, good luck in this contest
    Linda


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Beautiful poem, appreciative of the colorful creation provided for us and credit given to the Creator and giver of this gift. Well done my friend! Best of luck in this contest.

    Dennis


  • trekkergirl
    September 20, 2008
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    This is good. Love the imagery


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    SO BEAUTIFUL AND SOOTHING!!!!!

    This is everything that I love so much!!!!! All of us should have the opportunity to see this beauty everyday.'s

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