Forbidden
Lost; Confused
Hurt; Sad
Pissed; Incensed
Forbidden
Virtue; Emphasis
Berate; Bomb
Craving; Wanting
Forbidden
Lust; Passion
Pure ecstasy; Serene
Captivating; Hypnotic
Forbidden
What is this?
Is it right?
Is it wrong?
Forbidden
How do I describe this?
The experience of floating away
Its wrong; Feels so...so...admissible!
Forbidden
Us
Together, wrapped in our love
With the rhythm of life
Forbidden
Giving so much
Grasping what we can't have
No bother from outside forces
Forbidden
You and I forever more
No! Reality, we must come back
Our senses; A world we wish to escape
Forbidden
Nothing's allowed
Senses are shut; feelings are barred
Sacrificing is sin; giving is crime
Forbidden
Awakened
Truth of what's right
What's wrong and what is not ours
Forbidden
Stop!
Don't ever consider!
Abomination is what it is!
For I never knew that love
could be forbidden for some hearts
Author notes
yea idk i needed to kill time and to stop thinkin about him so i figured this would help lol bad yes i know!
Actual: the poem
Between (Hidden): the stress and sadness of a forbidden love...the heartbreak of loving someone so much and knowing that no matter what you do or how hard you try no one will ever be ok with your love for each other....
Beyond: knowing that no matter what people think your not going to give up on your love and that your love is real...yea its hard but it worth it... the feeling of knowing that that person is yours and that they truly love you... and that no matter what their not giving up on you... the joy of it all...
Inspiration: Him...hes everything to me...and i know people dont like that we're together but you know wat?? they can kiss it! he loves me and i love him and i know the age thing is kinda weird but who cares! the law doesnt so why should anyone else!?
P R I N C E S S C U D D L E B U G
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez.
626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Forbidden
Lost; Confused
Hurt; Sad
Pissed; Incensed
Hm.. I'm not really sure if I like this poem. It seemed like you were just listing synonyms.
Thanks for entering.
4/10
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beauty
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I do not see rhyme in this poem. I am taking that you did not read all of the rules
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Stingingly appealing...thanks for your entry and good luck with it
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wowzers, this was great! i DEFINITELY did not think it was bad! i looooooved it very very much! it was so original compared to the other poems in my contest. it kept me on the edge of my seat, i just couldn't stop reading it! seriously, i thought this was amazingly written and thank you for entering. good luck. well done!
-adria =)
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I liked it. I like the style. Its laid out in such a way that it makes relating to it a cinch. I like how the fifth stanza asks, "How do I describe this?"
..when the first four stanzas describe it pretty well. Great write, probably my favorite of yours.
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