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Shame & Vice

And this, the smell of sin,
open to interpretation,
clings to my hands;
a sleazy perfume.
Sin drips from my nose,
and sours in my mouth;
the smell of regret.

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  • SoulfulBubbles
    September 19, 2008

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    oo i like this
    thanks for entering
    i think it would be neat if you continued it

    congrats your a finalist