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lights

wash away scrawls on the wall
cave drawings of a modern era
this city dies between passing cars
and shuffling feet
when strangers pass and we meet
eye to eye
momentary presence
shy away
a heart beat flickers and fades away
siren crescendos, steady tattoos
dog barks, break the night
concrete jungle holds us
neon signs
stars lost in the lights



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  • Matt Holck
    September 21, 2008

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    reminds me of something I read in freaklings.com

    an empty stretched out
    an ommnicient viewer observing the city from the hill
    focus on heart beats then draws aways


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Ah..the reality of the metro cities are the hard concerns of life..and your immagery is reflecting the same..well said..