Let's give it up for freedom
We are the hands of human rights
Some thousands born, we kill a thousand
To keep the numbers right
Come take my hand
And join the band
And bow down for the man
Who saves the world
Let's dance for our justice
And bow for purity
Let's free all the psychos
And plead insanity
Come on take my hand
And join the bad
We're in definition mad
That's how we save the world
It has always been their war
We are the hands of wisdom
It's their bombs that shake the floor
Let's find a way to kill them
Come take my hand
And join the band
And bow down for the man
Who saves the world
So what you're waiting for
Let's give them all the bombs
All the guns and give them more
A fair fight to the tombs
Come on take my hand
And join the bad
We're in definition mad
That's how we save the world
Author notes
I chose title three "their guns and their bombs"
This poem is a special dedication to mister President, enjoy!
A contest entry
- My Points - Your Decision by Rock-Junkie.
700 points, ended September 29, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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being a person of Anti-Politics....
I feel your pain
having 3/4 of my friends in the military, now - it's hard to see this so-called war take place. "War for Peace" - it's really contradicting, and I hate contradiction!! grr.... ANYways!
this is a really good take-on the Title.
great job and good luck!! -
You're a republican?!? Say it isn't so!


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Nah! I hate politics and politicians... I just want peace for the world!
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I hate wars you know that. lol. Thanks for commenting on the poem, very delighted to hear from you..
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My
It does ring of frsutration of which many can feel. War if it must be should be fought to win and never lose. But I get the feeling that you understand that. But one very alert write young poet.
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