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Their bombs and their guns

Let's give it up for freedom
We are the hands of human rights
Some thousands born, we kill a thousand
To keep the numbers right

Come take my hand
And join the band
And bow down for the man
Who saves the world

Let's dance for our justice
And bow for purity
Let's free all the psychos
And plead insanity

Come on take my hand
And join the bad
We're in definition mad
That's how we save the world

It has always been their war
We are the hands of wisdom
It's their bombs that shake the floor
Let's find a way to kill them

Come take my hand
And join the band
And bow down for the man
Who saves the world

So what you're waiting for
Let's give them all the bombs
All the guns and give them more
A fair fight to the tombs

Come on take my hand
And join the bad
We're in definition mad
That's how we save the world

Author notes

I chose title three "their guns and their bombs"
This poem is a special dedication to mister President, enjoy!

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  • Rock-Junkie
    September 28, 2008

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    being a person of Anti-Politics....
    I feel your pain

    having 3/4 of my friends in the military, now - it's hard to see this so-called war take place. "War for Peace" - it's really contradicting, and I hate contradiction!! grr.... ANYways!
    this is a really good take-on the Title.

    great job and good luck!!

  • DarkRomantic113
    September 19, 2008
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    You're a republican?!? Say it isn't so!


    • Janenroses
      September 19, 2008
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      Nah! I hate politics and politicians... I just want peace for the world!


  • Janenroses
    September 19, 2008
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    I hate wars you know that. lol. Thanks for commenting on the poem, very delighted to hear from you..

  • Bob Fox
    September 19, 2008

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    My

    It does ring of frsutration of which many can feel. War if it must be should be fought to win and never lose. But I get the feeling that you understand that. But one very alert write young poet.

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