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You Broke my Heart on MSN

I hit the BACKSPACE
button to totally erase
the words on the screen
that put that look on my face

i can't believe you TYPED that
and i'm wondering why!!
hiw could you do that??
then click off
and all i get is
a BYE?

Thats sad
even for you
to type a smiley face
and totally skip
the I <3 U's


So i blocked you
and i'm never gonna talk 2 u
again!
you broke my heart
on MSN....

OMG

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  • Rudy Ignatius
    September 19, 2008

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    This is a wonderful use of poetry and instant messaging. I thought it was very clever to initiate the use of chatspeak. Honestly, this could be a novelty song. Too, as sad as it is, it is also very cute and delightful. Nothing beats a breakup via the Net. Truly terrific to read!

    Write (Type) on,
    Smiling


  • Whispering-Night
    September 19, 2008
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    I have absolutely NO idea WhErE this came from!!!