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- painter on high -

Missing image

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above splattered hues

painter from above looks down

pretty decent work

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Author notes

A traditional western Haiku'

 

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5-7-5

 

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A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    What a wonderful haiku, such an aha moment at the end as I would expect from such an accomplished writer. Thank you for your in depth critique on my contest entry. I appreciate all your suggestions. Best to you and congratulations on your HM


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Congratulations Arkbear!

    Great picture and great set of words!! THANKS ARKBEAR AND CONGRATULATIONS!!


  • sheltered
    September 20, 2008
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    Excellent.
    You must know me?
    Great work.


    • Arkbear gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      Thanks Bro for the HM.....love the winner of Gold......great job choosing

      God bless you & thanks for Hosting!

      Brother Bear ~


  • Poesing
    September 20, 2008

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    Gorgeous picture - More than pretty decent I think.....reminds me of the song "I Can Only Imagine". Have you heard it? It's beautiful.

  • carole21
    September 20, 2008

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    nicely penned . . love the picture . . also "painter from above looks down" . . good luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    a wonderful haiku I love the imagery and theme you have painted with your words good luck in the contest


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 19, 2008
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    Pretty decent work indeed... the best there is! Beautifully crafted bro!

    Huggles,

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