Hey!?
What happened today?
You aren't you,
there isn't really anything to you.
I wish I could express
how I feel in this current moment
of life,
which, in my now confused mind,
was once referred to as this amazing
existence of eternity.
Are you all right?
Earth to Patrick!
Hello?
Where is the sweet, romantic,
passionate actions of admiration
that was shared between us just
yesterday?
Is there anymore love?
Okay, I'm desperate!
Forget love,
where is the friendship?
No, no, wait!
Where are your eyes?
Where are your beautiful, green eyes,
the ones that ogle at my facial image
every single chance they turn my way?
Do those eyes even notice your best
friend is here?
Right, I am here, I am here!
Ya know, one of these days,
my whole longing, love sick body
will drift and sway,
until I am right there
by your gorgeous face,
and you
will realize...
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
Author notes
My bff was having a bad day today... i hate it when he is upset about something! he doesnt look at anyone, he goes off by himself and i feel horrible when he does that! anywayz, have some hugglez! =D
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I love how you wrote this, very good write.
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thank you! =)
hugs <3
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this is a sweet poem. sorry to hear that your boyfriend is upset. But sometimes things happen... things will hopefully get better.
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awh i hope he's feeling better, you truly do care about him alot, he needs to read this
lovely write dear!
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An interesting read. Your concern for your friend comes through clear. Its simple but well written and easy to understand which is the way poetry should be. Good write and thank you for entering my contest.
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