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Rays and Rivers of Belief

Dedicated to all rays of light!

 


 

Rays of sunshine and rivers of belief,
Here is the place to escape ones grief..

Amidst the warming rays of the sun,
You can gently sit upon...

The enchanting banks of the blue lagoon,
To watch and see if the sun turns into the moon!

Beautiful vibrant rays of radiant light,
A beautiful mesmerising joy and delight...

To view this amazing fantasy scene,
In real life would have to be seen!

Rays of light and hope for mankind,
The sort of very inspiring kind.

Your mind can take you to amazing places,
If you realize how to put it through its paces!

Where there is life there is hope,
Where there is hope there is life you'll cope!

The elixir of life is love and humour,
No this is not just a mere rumour..

Always look toward the light,
That way life will stay good and bright....

Your mind is infinite when enlightened your soul,
And in the radiance of brightness you feel so whole.

Rays of sunshine rich in vitamin D,
Free to all to be healthy and fit you see!

 



Copyright:K:September 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
Contest Picture Prompt And Quote by Sandygram
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2421415
Great is the power of might and mind
But only love can make us kind
And all we are and hope to be
Is empty pride and vanilty
And if love is not a part of all
The greatest man is very small
By Helen Steiner Rose
Hello again. I found another amazing picture and great quote
so I decided to hold another contest. You can write
whereever you muse happens to take you. I am looking forward
to some wonderful entries. Take care. Sandy
Rules
1. No erotic popetry
2. No chat talk
3. Any form or length
4. Have fun!!
Enter this contest
  * This is an anonymous contest - your name will be
hidden from editors
* Closes in 13 days, or after 17 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200,
Honorable mention: 17 people
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem



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A fan of beautiful colours yonder a blue lagoon in a fantasy
land scene. Rays of Hope suggestion to it.


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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    Very nice, your words and complimented by your background! Congrats on the Bronze trophy.



    Dennis

  • chiefmac
    September 26, 2008

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    Nicely Penned, the rhyme and flow move slowly for the reader to absorb the line. The couplet work well for the form and is in keeping with techniques of the poetic craft. The vivid images provide fresh understanding. Lovely read.


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    This was beautifil and I love the rhyming. I always enjoy your poetry. Great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy


  • daviscth silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful reminder for us to always look toward the good things in our lives. The imagery is so beautiful as are the pictures. I just love it!!!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    oh wow

    love this one as well, your imingery is wonderful to read...
    good luck in this contest
    Linda


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Very nice responce to the poem and picture prompt. The rhyming couplets give the reader breaks between thoughts and a chance for all the wonderful imagery you write to sink in and be appreciated. Best of luck in the contest.

    Dennis


    • Kazytc
      September 20, 2008
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      Thanks millions Dennis!

      Awww Thanks millions Dennis, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.

      Glad you liked it.

      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in
      them all.

      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

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