I soar
as the wind pushes up against my wings,
the sea mist spraying my gleaming scales
The waves crash against rocky shores,
the thundering booms
Echoing
Echoing
Echoing through the land
My eyes search for my prey
the fish that dart in the sun sparkled waters,
gleaming arrows of silver
I fly
and the sun beats against my scales
The sunset reflects off wings
For I am Sunset
For I am the Bronze Dragon
Animal seek refuge under my wings
Looking for shelter
or love
or warmth
They flock to the entrance
of my sea cavern
They wait while I hunt,
while I swim
I defend them
against hunters and fishers
and those who seek to destroy
those who were there before them
And so the animals flock
For I am Sunset
And I am the Bronze Dragon
And the waves crash against rocky shores,
the thundering booms
Echoing
Echoing
Echoing through the land
Author notes
This is Battle One for the Lairs of Dragon Poets earning the Breath of Fire group.
Hope you like it 
yeah 0.o
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ummm no offense phe but y are all these peeps saluting u? neway its a sweet poem, dude.
i salute u 2, just for the record
lilzipan
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I'm part of this group thingy
I guess they salute people
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Yeah! This bronze is golden.
I see a beautiful 'dragon' voice in this first person narrative. Well done in making her your own.
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Sunset welcome ye Brass Dragoness. Ye are welcome within our ranks.
Black Dragoness
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Merry meet Might Sunset,
I love the repetions of the echoing boom of the sea against the cliffs, it created a visceral feeling in the body of the deep echoing sound.
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Blessed BE
The beautiful Sunset scales of the Brass Dragon
shine in your words. I am honored to be on this
journey unto these new lands with you.
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WE SALUTE YOU SUNSET BRASS DRAGONESS
wonderous honor to have you boldly amongst us!
Shining your poetess of power,
and bold dragon heart of strength!
we will need to help us confine and maintain
the seductress of all evil Medusa does approach!
flamesdragoness
a mighty foe to her you will be!
our young dragons will need your courage.
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This is a wonderful introduction which I thoroughly enjoyed reading out loud... with its 'Echoing, Echoing, echoing!
Please blaze away with your wings Sunset, make haste to:
Battle number Two..'o...'o....'o....'o......'o
Sol
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