trick
"I will show you a trick," I said, placing the wine glass between her knees.
"I will as well," she replied, opening her knees, letting it fall. She kept opening until they were a sideways laid bottle apart. More.
I had to admit her trick's superiority. And her wine's too.
*
fruit
First I thought they were cherries, hanging there for me to pick. I knew they were not when she screamed... "... hey, that's my nipples."
I knew there was revenge in the air, yet I never saw it coming.
"I thought that's a banana," she grinned maliciously, as I screamed.
*
hunger
I dropped two apples in and wore her bra. She dropped an apple in and wore my shorts.
"You look appetizing," I said.
"You look delicious," she replied.
We were famished, we attacked each other's fruits ravenously.
No, no, think, the other way around... yep, the apples were for later.
Author notes
i am not the king of brevity, quite the contrary. maybe the king of erotica 
, i might admit to that. but the king of brevity?... blahhh. yet, this was a challenge i presented myself with - 50 words stories to steam the lid off a tea kettle. and i guess i didn’t come out so bad, after all 
...oh, sorry, i know it’s not poetry, i simply dislike the “other” site 
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Comments
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The lead of tea kettle must to jump high of this hot fifty words steam. C'mon, I knew that you can do it. And of course each king need a queen.
~Sonja~
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Ehhh...who needs 50 words, anyway??? Surely not you, Scribe.
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These three scenes were nicely done. This looks like a great idea for a contest. Hmmm... I don't know how "steamed" my tea kettle lid got (they didn't cross the line into an adult category in my opinion), but they were good erotica with just the right touch of humor (which also tends to keep down the "steam"). Very enjoyable!
~Phoenix
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