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He asks of my tears
after years to recover
he still has my heart.

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  • sheltered
    September 20, 2008
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    Bluntly emotional.
    Great flow.


  • ScarsFade
    September 19, 2008

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    wow...gosh that gave me goosebumps who knew only a few words could be so powerful...AMAZING....i really loved it keep it up i have had this feeling before and writting it helps times a million...scars.