golden leaves cover
branches with spiralling arms
radiant new coat
Author notes
traditional haiku - 5,7,5 syllables
Please tell me what you think
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An autumn view...Your window shows such beauty...."spiralling arms...radiant new coat" Excellent imagery!
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autumn is so beautiful! loved ur poem.. short and succint!
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Wow what a lovely haike about fall I so enjoyed reading and your background goes so well with your amazing write. Thanks for sharing, hugs Theresa
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Beautiful haiku,G...I love the spiralling arms radiant new coat. Glad to be back reading again!
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lovely haiku
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You don't really need me to add to the galaxy of praise heaped on your splendid haiku. But, well done for autumn - just arriving here but never as spectacular as New England.
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What a beautiful fall poem. You have total control of the haiku with the perfect 5/7/5 syllable count.
Love,
Amera♥
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nice, Erika ... to me the operative word is 'radiant' and it occurs after the images laid down and it is both adjective and adverb here because it reflects back to the former two lines and then forward through its own final line ... nice ... you have a beautiful little gem here ... my favorite kind
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I have spent the last few weeks in the western mountains...the colours they are a changing.
good write
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i dont really understand much about haiku but i like the feeling of this poem! nice write..i'm so glad its not autumn in oz though..love spring!!
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As beautiful as it is I can't get over the nasty image of coming winter... blea
Great Ku!
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oh my!
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Ah, autumn is here and your haiku makes that so very clear. well done.
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mmmmmm i love this....it makes me waaaay happy yay for fall....it's soo beautiufl and oct. is my birth month so another reason to love it. Anyways enough of the sidetracked nonsense, i throughly enjoyed your poem in it's shortness it reminded me of some fond past memories...really lovely....scars.
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