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autumn fairy

leaves float sideways
scenes of tiny magic lore
a colorful red blanket

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haiku
non-traditional

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  • sheltered
    September 20, 2008
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    Great images.I like the way you flipped syllables and made it work well. Pretty-near traditional.


  • nature
    September 20, 2008

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    A lovely take

    seeing the autumn leaves falling and thinking of their past life as magic lore; ending in a red color of carpet-in-leaves has much beauty to tell in such short lines.