Faith
Creator of beauty, in Him have faith.
Follow, and you shall see the way.
Be not afraid child, for the father protect us.
A shelter form the storm of evil.
Holding all beauty in His hands.
Do you feel worthy?
Does your faith shine?
A light unto the path of righteousness.
Let Him lead, forever shall I have faith.
For He is my salvation.
My reason of life.
Through Him all thing are possible.
For my faith shall live through Him,
And all things shall be clear.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tragic Accident by she still smiles x.
400 points, ended November 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A very nice write. Some typos are fallow-follow and dose-does...and I think he and him should be He and Him, other than that a good job.
Thank you for entering.
Sam
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thanx sam
good contest thanx for helping me with the typos some thimes i have thim good luck with the jugement as well
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I am not a huge person for religion but i have to say faith in a higher power...i do have...and you brought some reall elegance in the way you presented your face....so beautiful, pure, and strong....i really loved the poem it has a great message and you are a great writter keep on doing what you do....scars.
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thanx so much for your comment it means alot to me and being abel to shear my feath or inspier people is alsome you are more thin welcome to read my other poems and i will read some of yours
eternalsol
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