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you and me

Blinded Eyes
Why can't you see?
The truth, the lies
You and Me

We are sin
Your lock, my key
It fits right in
Like you and me

I know what your thinking now
So cute, so pretty
I wonder How
You and me

I disobey and command
Im the flower your the bee
I let you know where we each stand
It you and me

I love you
You say to me
I dont say as you do
But you always know, It's you and me

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  • SoulfulBubbles
    September 19, 2008

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    hmm this is interesting as it seems like it still could go many directions

    i like the flow of it


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