Whispered secrets
of goodbye,
splintered blame
set forth to die.
Choking along
the lies of fate,
farewell she said
for you've
come to late.
Tears of rage pour
from your
bloodshot eyes,
as the coffin closes,
nailed shut
by lies.
In your heart
a dagger plunges
through the pain,
stalked by memories
it's making you insane.
Lost upon
a crimson hope
of flight
slowly souls
leave behind
the bloodless rays of
golden light...
Is this a good poem??? Or are my friends lying to me
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Excellent!!
It made me want to leave the daggers behind. I Loved it! Your friends were right, very well done.
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A fantastic write...your friends were very honest to you! I loved it
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thanks... i hope they were honest, hard to tell sometimes..
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totally...awesome
BTW- i was NOT lying to you!!!!
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amazing
your friends are not lying.
this is really good.
~*Renee*~
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