On opposite ends of a feather pallet
two flames ignite the fires of passion.
Steaming hot breath, surround moist kisses
reaching, touching, skin tightens, quivering.
In a downward spiral toward euphoric mist
goose bumps trail behind probing tongues
deep into the valley of swelling desires.
Author notes
2. I tingled all over, as he teased my senses.
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- Haven't had one of these in a while... by Luckintheshadows.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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i felt quite hot with this outpouring of desire,,best of luck
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Nice title but it didn't turn me on...I want sex when I see it.
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very sensual write, thank you!
thank you for entering
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this is a great write. and very fitting with the image that YOU posted with the poem. however I would prefer it if it was written for my image.
whats good about this is that its not an epic. youve gone straight to the point and used beautiful words and images. this poem reads well out loud because of that. well done. Emmyb -
Very senaual and am sure it was worth the memory....thank you for entering my contest....novy
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Thank you for your most beautiful and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Very tactile write. Each word is chosen for it's pulp and matter. Juicy would be a word for it.
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Very nice. Very desciptive.
Short, sweet, and naughty. I do believe you covered everyting I asked for!
Thanks for entering! I'd love to see you enter something into another option as well!
Always,
V
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Very good. Very well written. Great imagery and quite seductive. Not quite the dark subject matter I was looking for but still quite an excellent poem. Thanks for entering!
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such a way with words thank you very much for joining this contest
best of luck to you.
Riftkin
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OK
you win LOL. Very hot! Wonderful imagery - love the valley of swelling desires... beautiful description... Excellent!
Ken
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I'm flattered. Thank you for your wonderful compliment
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Oh hot brilliance in imagery of words !
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment
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OOOOh so very passionate.
Really enjoyed this write
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Very erotic description. It doesn't take much to get the whole picture here. Very descriptive and well done.
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Hey Ed Thank you for the wonderful compliment on this poem
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I loved this. Fantastic write.
-JM<3
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