You’re bleeding from within
Withering in your own skin
Are you human anymore?
Were you human before?
When it hurts inside,
You just try to hide,
And when the pain is too much,
You lose that natural touch.
You can’t handle being so angry
So you’ve become another zombie,
And you hated life so much
That you’ve lost that natural touch.
Author notes
Title prompt.
A contest entry
- My Points - Your Decision by Rock-Junkie.
700 points, ended September 29, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked this...a lot!! being the assuming person that I am thought this would be with nature only... but it caught me by surprise - in a good way!
Favorite :
"You can't handle being so angry
So you've become another zombie..."
great job and good luck in the contest!!
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