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his tomorrow fool (H.M.)

Missing image


She was yesterday’s girl
stepped on, beaten down
lingering as a shrouded figment of love
in the shadow left by tomorrow’s fool


Author notes

Poem inspired by the contest picture

Picture Credit: http://evilxelf.deviantart.com/art/Yesterday-s-Girl-38650200

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    I love how in just a few lines you captivated me with it's gripping, sharp and harshly penned take on the picture

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    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    Perfect words for the picture...once again strenght in brevity and sorrow...well written truth for too many...love the metaphor and word choice...well done!
    Best,
    mystic