I am universe
universe is me
collectively we are all elements
of big union in 'sets'of mathematics
universe in equilibrium
by pulls and pushes,
of planets, stars and solar system
one thing can escape
still falls into itself
universe is of infinite size
we can not add to it
nor we can take something away,
self contained
one emerge out of another,
revolving in cyclic way
we have created centres of our own
in the name of religion, nation and continents
individuals created their own nuclei
cling to their own,
ultimately all ego loosen
makes us part of higher and higher states
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at one level we are something
highest level,
all belongs to great universe
whether we accept or otherwise
Author notes
every one is citizen of planet and planet is part of universe, we are all citizens of universe
A contest entry
- I'm a Citizen of The Planet by Edited.
1000 points, ended October 3, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well Done
'at one level we are something' a great line that means a lot. a well written piece.
Thnx for your entry. -
a great poem dad very deep and powerful we are all part of the universe and should all learn to live together as one race regardless of colour creed or religion good luck in the contest dad take caremaralisa
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at one level we are something
highest level
all belongs to great universe
whether we accept
or otherwise
does this make it right?
Is that what youmean?
I think I'm lost completely.
care to explain, please?
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