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My cure

Sometimes
when life is full of happiness
and smiles are all over the place
I feel like I need to cry
for no reason the colored world turns gray
for no reason all bad memories flash through my mind
the light that has always brightened my way slowly fades away
leaving my soul struggling in the dark
tears start filling my eyes
once I try to think about it
a tear drops
followed by a stream
I sigh.
The burning fire inside my heart cools down in a rush
The surrounding starts to get it's color back
and the faint light spot reappears in the darkness
the darkness disappears
I regain my smile
now I realize
the tear is my cure

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  • herrlurch
    January 4

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    I loved the way how you describe the surging in l. 9-13 plus the "reappears... disappears" part in l. 16f. I hope however that your smile in l. 18 is for real, not fake. All the best, Götz