A sleepy swamp
would I go?
And its silence
I will owe.
Alone, all alone
I would go.
To confirm things,
that I know.
Until -
I shall realize.
The swamp,
would never flow,
to the sea, to the sea
where I want to go...
Critics and critiques are welcome :)
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Tale Of Wonderous Longing
for the majestic lengths of oceans hue. To lose oneself, as you drift for the far horizion beckoning you.
Wonderful Offering!
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A longing to be somewhere else, frightened to take that first step?
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a feeling of being stangnant in loneliness of being alone...maybe it's just me
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Well done, this is a great poem, so well written and inspiring, great job
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Brilliant!!!
Thank you for sharing your an awe-inspiring poem with us!!! Peace, Cyn 
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A thoughtful way to express longing. A note: "what I know" should more correctly read "that I know"
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