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A lifetime is not enough.........

If I could explain the feelings I get

whenever you are near.

Or even explain the feeling I get

when you whisper in my ear.

Do you see me lift off the ground

when you kiss and hold me tight.

Do you feel the love I feel

when your kissing me good night.

 

Do you long to spend time with me?

Do you wonder where I may be?

When ever we're apart

I always wish you were with me.

No matter how much time we spend together

you always leave me craving,  oohh so much more.

Even if I had a life time with you

I know i'd still want more.

A life time is not enough

with the person I adore.

 

 

 

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    This is very sweet and heartfelt.
    Forever is never long enough when you
    are with the one that you love. Lovely
    thought for this picture!




    Jeremy0826


  • The Drifter
    September 19, 2008
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    You tell it well--a fine write and apleasant read.
    bw


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    aaww..

    This is so sweetly written! very touching piece here my friend, I see the romantic came out in you on this! very nice.


  • Kindredblood
    September 19, 2008

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    WOW

    Ok I'll admit im not much of a romantic, but your words here are so full of feeling, so many quiet thoughts woven to create something that feel right, reading it made me think wonder maybe I am missing something, being a (loner that is)you have a true gift for wording, like painting a living portrait, as I read it was like seeing a wonder unfold, truely amazing, and I hope life treats your well, this poem i liked and I thank you for sharing.