Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Ginger Rag_DoLL

I can only stand so far away
From you
I'm tied upon a string
On fingertips that you forgot you had
And angelwings you hide behind
A veil of innocence


Disjointed yet you still
Manage to grab hold of me
Through ways you're not even aware
Static feedback from my wicked mind
I've melted
In one place
And my soul
Refuses to leave you

I'll look outside my window hoping to see you running from behind the trees
Because I've no more ways left to hold on to you
While you slowly fade into the future

Author notes

DoLL, by terra
image is mois
on my old arcade's ddr machine

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Justinintendo
    October 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You win gold, the poem is awesome, but you win simply because you are the only entry I've had...thanks for playing..


  • shecantstopfalling.
    September 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is very very good.


    Disjointed yet you still
    Manage to grab hold of me
    Through ways you're not even aware
    Static feedback from my wicked mind
    I've melted
    In one place
    And my soul
    Refuses to leave you

    That is just the best verse! I realy do love it!