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The Seduction

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As I walk up behind you, you flinch as you are surprised by me, putting my arms around your waist and hands on your stomach. You put your hand to my face. My tongue traces your ear, as I suck your earlobe into my mouth, you sigh. Slowly my hands slide up your stomach under your blouse to your breasts, there over your bra I grasp your breasts firmly pulling you against me, you moan.

My hands move to the center where I unhook your bra and slide under it to hold your warm naked breasts in my hands, you take a deep breath then sigh. Your nipples are so hard as I run my fingers across them and with a gentle pinch to them you squirm. You put your hands on mine as my teeth gently nip your earlobe and my tongue slides down your neck where I kiss your shoulder, wetting it with my tongue.

Your hands on mine, they slide down your stomach to the buttons of your jeans.  We unbutton your jeans, putting my thumbs into your panties; I slide my hands around to your hips. Bending my knees, kissing your back as my tongue works its way down you, taking your jeans and panties down to your ankles in one slow motion.

My tongue at the crack of your ass, then moving down I gently bite the cheek, you moan and squirm, I lick the bite as my kisses move to your hip. I shift my body around to one side, my legs straddling and trapping your leg, one knee across your foot you cannot move. My left hand moves slowly up the back of your leg to your crotch, my right up the front of your leg to your mound, you groan as I play with your fuck button.

♥ 

My left hand forcing its way between your legs, you cannot spread them any more as they are bound by your jeans and panties, but you try. As my hand is forced between your legs my thumb enters you, you cry out. You are so hot and wet, you start to tremble and breathe harder. My thumb inside you at your spot of pleasure my fingers are just right at your vibrating button, replacing my other hand which now moves up to your breasts.

You put your hand behind my head; pulling me to you I kiss your hip, your soft waist with my lips and tongue tasting your sweet flesh. My hand playing with your breasts gently pinching your hard nipples, my other hand thrusting between your legs my thumb plunging into your heavenly body and fingers rubbing your button with every thrust.

You throw your head back; you struggle to keep your balance, your body now shaking uncontrollably as your orgasm begins. Relentlessly I plunge deeper into your hot pussy, again and again my thumb against your temple of pleasure my fingers attaking your button, bringing your orgasm to its peak you cry out, OH GOD, OH GOD YES, YES, YES. Your silky hot cum runs into my hand, down my arm and drips onto the floor.

Excited from watching and feeling the pleasure I am giving you, I press my hard cock into your leg, again and again and I groan as I shoot my wad. I feel my underwear soaked from my load, as I slow my movements and we bask in the glow of our orgasms, you enjoying a few more jolts of lightning as a pleasant surprise.

Slowly I slide my hand from your breasts down your stomach, down your leg and take hold of your ankle. I spread my knees releasing your foot which I lift out of your jeans and panties. I spread your legs releasing my hand, as I remove my thumb from your throbbing wet pussy you gasp and more of your sweet nectar spills onto the floor.

On my knees I move around in front of you, my hands on the cheeks of your ass, I pull you to me. I kiss your mound, you are shaking and your knees start to buckle. As your knees bend my hands slide up your back, my kisses up your stomach, between your breasts to your neck. As you crumble into my arms, I lower you to the floor and we kiss, our tongues finding each other we embrace. With our hearts pounding, we hold each other; we are one, body and soul.

 

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By ~ Maxboy
Background ~ Red Vixen ~ By ~ Little Feather
Photo ~ art.uk.com



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  • Erotic alright.....

    I don't generally comment on whether or not something is a poem or not - but I don't see it here.
    Not to say that it's not interesting or written well, just doesn't ring the poetry bell for me.

    Thanks for the.....ugh.....mood shift.

    Sincerely,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 6
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      Perhaps in the eye of the beholder, as with anything.



  • cybilseyes silver member
    July 4
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    great piece but you new that obviously!
    thanks!
    xo
    Cyb


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 10
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Again

  • Great job, this is another beautiful one from you.
    The only thing I would suggest, it's not even a critique really, just a suggestion, you can choose to take my advice or not
    This line “kissing your back as my tongue works its way down your back,"
    I think it's repetitive, the word back is used to close together. Maybe it could be like
    Kissing your back as my tongue works its way down you,

    Something like that, your choice it is your wonderful poem.

    Favorite lines
    "With our hearts pounding, we hold each other; we are one, body and soul."

    ~Serenity

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 8
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and great suggestion, I am very happy you enjoyed my write and I took your advice and made the change. I have a bad habit of not revisiting my work often enough to see things like what you found. Looking at something when in a different frame of mind is usually a good idea.

      Thank You


  • Antebellum
    June 25

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    "I shift my body around to one side, my legs straddling and trapping your leg, one knee across your foot you cannot move. "

    wonderful description.

    thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 29
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      Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, I am glad you liked my write.



  • ladybug.
    June 23

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    Again, you wowed me with the ability to be poetic in an erotic way. Not many people can say they can do that. I'm marveled at this, I can't think of what to say about it.
    Thank you for sharing.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 25
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • geckogirl silver member
    June 8

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    Now that was a piece to be proud of... well done, that was one great piece... good luck

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 8
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      Thank you so much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. I didn't understand the picture had to be of the author herself, so I removed it.

      Thank You

  • very nice work!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 26
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.


  • Thank you so much for this. An excellent write. I'm not entirely pleased with the amount of contests it's in but oh well. Good luck and thanx for following my rules

    Rose

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 1
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. Although, I don't understand what the number of contests [4-Open] it is entered into has to do with anything, that does puzzle me.



  • KelsBabez
    May 22
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    Good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 11
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      Thank you for the applause and comment, I hope you enjoyed my write.


  • damn this was hot!!, deffintly one of the more raw and graphic erotics poems I've ever read.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 27
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy you liked my write.


  • wow, this is fucking amazing!
    i loved the fuck button line1
    thanx for sharin with me!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 18
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • lol "fuck button" thats pretty funny =)

    "Your hands on mine, they slide down your stomach to the buttons of your jeans. We unbutton your jeans, putting my thumbs into your panties; I slide my hands around to your hips. Bending my knees, kissing your back as my tongue works its way down your back, taking your jeans and panties down to your ankles in one slow motion."

    that was the best part. you wrote so detailed and i loved how the stanzas were seperated with hearts. I can see why you won all those trophies for this one!
    Great write!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 8
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Ice Queen
    May 5

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    Very nice poem. I loved it. Wonderfully penned and good job! Thanks for entering and good luck to you.


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 17
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      Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy, I am very pleased you enjoyed my writes.

      Thank You Again

  • Amazing poem, nice and detailed

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 8
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy, but most of all, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Again

  • Well now, this sounds familiar to a situation I've been in. Hot poem/prose.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 24
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, I am very happy you liked my write.



  • Night Terrors
    April 19

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    Oh so very sexy way to turn me on! I love erotica! This was so good. Way to make the reader want to jump your bones!


    The Positives:

    Very steamy and so very well written great imagery as well


    The Negatives:

    Nothing that I see great job



    My Favorite Part:
    Slowly I slide my hand from your breasts down your stomach, down your leg and take hold of your ankle. I spread my knees releasing your foot which I lift out of your jeans and panties. I spread your legs releasing my hand, as I remove my thumb from your throbbing wet pussy you gasp and more of your sweet nectar spills onto the floor.





    That was so freaking sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Overall:

    I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.

    ~*~Apathetic Poison~*~


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 19
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • TheDemonEve
    April 14

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    HOT! I need a cold shower after that one. Exquisite writing, my dear.

    Best of luck and thanks for entering!


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 29
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Reanna Eryn
    March 24
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    Well written. Intresting concept.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 24
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.


  • all one can say at this point..

    Well penned.

    Good luck

    Passions

    • Maxboy gold member
      March 29
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy sis, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write and happy to have you as a sister and be part of your family

      Thanks Sis
      Bro


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 15
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Selestial
    March 6

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    OMG

    Ok.. so that ROCKED out loud! Dang... who knew I'd need to kewl off after reading poetry! Great work!


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 6

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      hahaha Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and applause, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.


  • Very nice! Hot write! Great background. Thanks so much for entering my contest. You did very well choosing a prompt.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 5
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      Thank you for your great comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Rheea gold member
    February 14

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    uhuh he ask me to leave my gun at home and come as I am ... laughing at you. naked naked naked as my grand daughters say in the tub .


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 15
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      Thank you for the comment Rheea, glad you stopped by.



  • Oleander
    February 14
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    This is good. *clappy clap*


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 14
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • sheltered
    February 14
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    w2hat

    this was the winning pre-write btw...
    ... of awesomed
    all-around...
    and all l around and what


  • sheltered
    February 14
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    i totally enjoyed this shit man,
    thannk for playing along
    life is good though eh even so...

  • sheltered
    February 13

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    wow

    i didn't mean to allow prewrites but you and some others made me glad i did
    thanks for the enlightenment... lol

    spectacular!


  • Rheea gold member
    February 8
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    well yes I imagine crumble would be the word here mmm oh.


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 8
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      Thank you sweetie, with the applause, I will take that as an approval.


  • MYsecondchance
    February 6

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    this was really good i perfer more poetic erotica no so much descriptions but this is still really good thanks very much for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 21
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am happy you liked my write.



  • doolie gold member
    January 30

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    Awww!!! I still remember when you first wrote this one. A very special day it was. Congrts on the trophies sweetie.


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 30
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment sweetie, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You


  • Beautiful Liar
    January 4

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    Wow, I just entered a poem for this contest and didn't read yours first but if I would have then I probably wouldn't of even thought of entering cause this poem is AMAZING. I love it. Every word had me craving more and I don't often read pieces like this but I'm glad I did. you deserve all the gold trophies. Im not very good at erotic writes but this poem made all of mine look bad. Wonderful job. Beautiful description.


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 5
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • XInsanity-FairX
    January 3

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    wow, this was just beautiful, the imagery, the passion and such strong emotions. every word dripping with love and uncontrolable heat
    amzing piece, well done, thanks for entering and good luck
    xxx

    • Maxboy gold member
      January 13
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      Thank you ever so much for the Honorable Mention, but most of all, I am so happy you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You Again


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 3
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • The D O M
    December 22, 2008
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    Very heated writing but this was a poetry contest, not prose, sorry


  • kitty23
    December 12, 2008

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    Loved it
    It was very vivid and descriptive

    Good luck in my contest
    thank you for entering

    Kitty23


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 17, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the Honorable Mention, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write and felt it worthy.



    • Maxboy gold member
      December 12, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • HisFavoriteMistake
    December 2, 2008
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    Loved it and very effective


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Thank you for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    A very long yet very good sensual/erotic write here. Can see why the ladies come away feeling a little moist lol. Well done and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 28, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    goodness glad i did save this until round the end i was switching and swaying in my damn seat like i had ants of tongues in my g strings good luck in the contest


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 25, 2008
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      Thank you so very much for the Honorable Mention, I am so happy you liked my write.



    • Maxboy gold member
      November 25, 2008
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      haha Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I am very happy you enjoyed my write.


  • the chase
    November 19, 2008
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    OH DEAR

    • Maxboy gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      I am sorry, but the contest was "push my buttons", that has many meanings to different people; you went on to say,
      "show me raw emotion,
      make me cry, or scream,
      better yet make me FEEL something...
      anything..".

      I believe I did push a button, even if it was shock.

      Believe me when I say, I am very sorry for the misunderstanding, I apologize.

      Don

      • the chase
        November 20, 2008
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        There was no misunderstanding, I very much enjoyed this piece

        • Maxboy gold member
          November 20, 2008
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          Well, I guess I did misunderstand, but it was your original comment. Thank you very much, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


      • the chase
        November 20, 2008
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        There was no misunderstanding, I very much enjoyed this piece


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    wo, is it hot in here? great write..very um...descriptive...lol. good luck in the contest


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • alaskanamber
    November 16, 2008

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    Muy Caliente!!!

    This is very hot. The parts I read of course. It's not quite what I'm looking for but congratulations on it's success.

    • Maxboy gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment, I wasn't sure if it was or not, please feel free to remove it or I can if you wish.

      Sorry


  • ChaingangAngel
    November 15, 2008

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    Loved it

    This write got me hot!!! I loved the imagery and all the descriptiveness of this write thanks for entering my contest and good luck to you!!! your very talented

    • Maxboy gold member
      November 29, 2008
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you so much for the Gold Trophy, most of all, I am soooo very happy that you enjoyed my write so much. It is such a good feeling to know others enjoy something I created.

      Thank You Again
      Don


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the applause and wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • kasickle
    November 5, 2008
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    im visiting my fiance now...... just perfect...


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your comment, I hope your visit is an enjoyable one.

      Thanks


  • Florida Sunshine
    November 2, 2008

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    Wow -- that's hot! The imagery is over the top ~ succulent treat of passion. Totally moving and inciting.

    Nice job -- thanks for entering the contest, I do appreciate the support. I'm sorry for taking so long to judge, I went on vacation. ~ but is back now.

    Florida Sunshine


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 6, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the Honorable Mention, I am happy you enjoyed my write.



    • Maxboy gold member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

  • mz.butter
    October 31, 2008
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    you go boy!!!!!

    that's all I got to say,I know that's right!!!


    • Maxboy gold member
      October 31, 2008
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      hahaha Thank you so much, I am happy you enjoyed it.


  • Ziola
    October 30, 2008

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    wow..wow.. i think im going to print this out and go upstairs now. I think us women know what area of the body you like to hang out at.


    • Maxboy gold member
      October 30, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write.

      OH YEAH


  • falling.hearts
    October 29, 2008

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    this poem is pretty much the greatest piece of sexual poetry ever! i really love it
    please write another one like it =]

    • Maxboy gold member
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your most wonderful comment and compliment, this is only my second such write, but I will see what I can do for another.

      Thanks Again


  • joleahe
    September 28, 2008
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    wow! damn this is good! such imagery and storyline! great job and thank you for entering!

    • Maxboy gold member
      October 29, 2008
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      WOW!!! Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy, I am very happy you enjoyed my write so much.

      Thank you again.
      Don

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