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Taste of Change

  Tether links grip ball

     [iron fortified]


              ********

                      
d r a g  is  grab

 
     when bellowed distance
      shatters mirrors

           beside breath's scatter.

 

 

Roundabout ...


    Black seals dissolve speculum,
       reflective granules pierce
          dusty, neurotic synapses

                once patronized.

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Art is what you can get away with. -Andy Worhol

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  • femurlee
    September 24, 2008

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    I like the simplicity of this style and the fact that it says so much still! You have a grand talent here. Thanks for keeping me entertained! Peace.


  • PerfectImperfection
    September 22, 2008
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    Well penned piece of thought. Best wishes in the contest!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    Dirty Pretty hehe.. I like it!!!

    Hmm.. I think I have quite a few "dusty, neurotic synapses" going on!!

    I likey!!